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No Easy Fix

While the Marine moved to sit on our opponent, he told me to keep the poster on his face while attempting to grab his hands.
This is a horrible sentence. There are three people being referred to: the narrator, the Marine, and the opponent. Who is exactly doing what in the latter part of the sentence is not clear. The sentence needs to be fixed.

What I want to stress here is that there is no easy fix. Filling the sentence with Marine, me, and opponent (or other such references) would actually make the sentence tedious. There is no proper solution except to completely rewrite. Many people who take up writing however do not want to go through the work. Sorry, but if you really want to be a good writer, you have to take on the labor of writing.


The Marine sat on our opponent and sought to grab his hands while telling me to keep the poster on his face.
Not only is this sentence more clear, but it is tighter. A great improvement for a little bit of work. Completely worth it.

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PostSubject: Limericks   September 5th 2008, 8:01 pm

A limerick has five lines.

Lines 1, 2, and 5 have seven to ten syllables and rhyme with one another.

Lines 3 and 4 have five to seven syllables and also rhyme with each other.


Here I'll give you an example:

My rhyme is beginning to stink.
They should prob`ly be washed down the sink.
If I could clean`em with soap,
then there`d be a bit more hope,
I`d go back to indullable ink.

Now there are many more rules to Limericks as far as word sounds. Writing a simple standard limerick seems the best choice for beginning limerick writers, such as myself.

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PostSubject: Re: Limericks   September 8th 2008, 7:42 pm

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Who thought she found in a shell a pearl
She touched it real quick
And something did lick
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