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HYdraMStar


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 | Subject: “Left to the Night Alone” by Andrea Dean van Scoyoc Fri Jul 03, 2009 12:42 pm | |
| “Left to the Night Alone” by Andrea Dean van Scoyoc Soon to be released under the title, “Vampire Alone” The storyline of “Left to the Night Alone” centers around Ivana Morriander. Ivana is undead. Note I did not call her a vampire, despite the new title her story is soon to be re-released under. I don’t personally see Ivana’s character as a vampire and after a brief online conversation with authoress I know she didn’t necessarily write her that way either, but apparently many other readers of the book did. The truth is expect for an aversion to sunlight there is absolutely nothing vampiric about Ivana and I’m frankly a little baffled by the insistence of other readers that she is. Personally, if I were forced to place a label upon Ivana’s existence it would be intellectual zombie… but I digress. Mostly the book chronicles two parts of Ivana’s life, or afterlife as the case maybe. The major focus, or larger part, deals with a time right around the Great Depression when she was friends with a New York bar owner, Dante. Dante’s bar and the young bartender he employed, Luther, become very dear to Ivana. So dear in fact that she is found in the opening scene of the book sitting in the modern day incarnation of the bar and thinking back on her old friends. The second part of the book is about her tumultuous relationship to an eccentric artist named Ruben. In-between the back and forth between her past and present with Ruben and Dante some events and happenings of her longer, older history are reviled, but mostly the book is about these two era’s in her life and how they relate to and contradict from each other. The characters of Dante and Luther are typical of what one would expect of people living during the time period. They are both at their core honest and good men who are focused to deal with the unpleasant nature life can take on from time to time. I have no trouble at all understand why Ivana would feel loss and longing for their friendship after their passing and why they would be difficult to replace. Ruben on the other hand is a bit of an odd duck. He’s awkward and unsure of himself, but at the same time comes off arrogant and formal. The conversations between him and Ivana are full of phrases and lines that seem very non-organic to any sort of conversation taking place in the modern day. It feels as though he and to a lesser degree Ivana, when she is around him, are trying just a little too hard to be, for lack of a better word, Goth. Beyond that it’s difficult for me to put into words how much I loathed Ruben. The tie in of the Dante’s and Ruben’s stories is important to the ending of the book. So, I will not give it away. But there is some math with the timelines of their stories that just doesn’t quite add up. For Dante’s mother and Ruben’s multiple great-grandfather to have known the same people and done all the things they claimed and for both stories to tie into Ivana’s past it would have required, in my figuring, for Dante’s mother to have been a couple hundred years old when she had him. But that aside it was an enjoyable and imaginative story. I truly had a hard time putting it down once I started reading it. Overall, I’d say I would suggest this one to anyone who likes undead characters who are full of moral fiber and emotional complexity. On the other hand, I’d advise anyone who likes blood and gore covered zombies or vamps to perhaps give this one a pass, because while there are some gruesome scenes that’s not what this book is about. That’s not what Ivana is about. |
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 | Subject: Re: “Left to the Night Alone” by Andrea Dean van Scoyoc Fri Jul 03, 2009 1:30 pm | |
| Nice review, I might give it a go if I ever see it about. _________________ Words are windows that allow others access to your imagination, the clearer the words, the better the picture
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 | Subject: Re: “Left to the Night Alone” by Andrea Dean van Scoyoc Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:38 pm | |
| Since I know you're a fan of Clive Barker, I'd suggest to you start with another of her books I've read and reviewed here.I will warn you before you look, you'll only find Andrea's work through online book sources; amazon.com, I believe now the Barnes and Nobles site, and lulu.com. You see, she's one of those kooky people who prefers self-publishing. (I don't personally consider her all that kooky, but most aspiring writers dreaming of landing a big book deal might.) |
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 | Subject: Re: “Left to the Night Alone” by Andrea Dean van Scoyoc Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:09 am | |
| | HYdraMStar wrote: | | I will warn you before you look, you'll only find Andrea's work through online book sources; amazon.com, I believe now the Barnes and Nobles site, and lulu.com. You see, she's one of those kooky people who prefers self-publishing. (I don't personally consider her all that kooky, but most aspiring writers dreaming of landing a big book deal might.) | She is not kooky. It is our establish publishers that are kooky. Instead of promoting writing (and reading), they feed a dwindling market with pablum.
While I hold parents responsible for our poor education system, I have a different perspective on our publishers. The market is crying for fresh ideas, and they go seeking writers like Andrea, me, and other independents. The established publishers are attempting to moan about poor literacy rates when the exact opposite is happening. People ARE reading, just not reading their stuff.
I am presently seeking a book deal, but by next summer I might again head out on my own._________________ Fantasy puts more requirements on the writer than any other fiction, because the world must be made as real before anything else can be real. Fantasy Gaming: Antheel Rules - Get the PDF! |
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 | Subject: Re: “Left to the Night Alone” by Andrea Dean van Scoyoc Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:24 am | |
| | HYdraMStar wrote: | Since I know you're a fan of Clive Barker, I'd suggest to you start with another of her books I've read and reviewed here.
I will warn you before you look, you'll only find Andrea's work through online book sources; amazon.com, I believe now the Barnes and Nobles site, and lulu.com. You see, she's one of those kooky people who prefers self-publishing. (I don't personally consider her all that kooky, but most aspiring writers dreaming of landing a big book deal might.) |
yes I'll wishlist that one at some point, ta _________________ Words are windows that allow others access to your imagination, the clearer the words, the better the picture
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 | Subject: Re: “Left to the Night Alone” by Andrea Dean van Scoyoc Sat Jul 04, 2009 10:11 am | |
| | TerishD wrote: | | HYdraMStar wrote: | | I will warn you before you look, you'll only find Andrea's work through online book sources; amazon.com, I believe now the Barnes and Nobles site, and lulu.com. You see, she's one of those kooky people who prefers self-publishing. (I don't personally consider her all that kooky, but most aspiring writers dreaming of landing a big book deal might.) | She is not kooky. It is our establish publishers that are kooky. Instead of promoting writing (and reading), they feed a dwindling market with pablum.
While I hold parents responsible for our poor education system, I have a different perspective on our publishers. The market is crying for fresh ideas, and they go seeking writers like Andrea, me, and other independents. The established publishers are attempting to moan about poor literacy rates when the exact opposite is happening. People ARE reading, just not reading their stuff.
I am presently seeking a book deal, but by next summer I might again head out on my own. |
I don't fully know the details of Andrea's story, but she started out, as you did, doing it herself, two or three of her books got picked up by traditional publishers, and then she returned to self-publishing by way of lulu.com.
I know part of why she returned was issues with one of the three publishers she worked under lying to her about sells and not paying royalties owed. The rest of her dealing in the world of traditional publishing I don't know about.
So, I can't say if it was an issue of them demanding a certain type of story or story changes out of her or what. I would, however, think with the works from her I've read this could very well be the case as they aren't at all the sorts of things being turned out by the big guys in horror fiction, which is what has made me a fan and gained her a respectable following.
Actually, one of her books recently reached number 12, I think, on one of Amazon's most downloaded books. That's just crazy to me when we're constantly being told by drones of the industry that no one reads self-published authors and the only way to make it is to conform to their formula of writing. It's a backwards industry, I tell you. |
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